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Daichi Sawamura x Reader :Failed Proposals:

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He never thought in a million years he'd be buying such an item, especially for such a girl.

(F/N) (L/N), hopefully soon-to-be (F/N) Sawamura.

It was only a couple of days after he had gotten the O.K. from her parents and he was already ripping through the city to find the perfect ring.
This is all thanks to Yachi Hitoka for dragging poor (F/N) into their volleyball practice.

We hit it off.

If only she knew the hell she's putting him through right now...

Unnerving thoughts that range from rejection to immediate disaster.

Yes, Daichi has experience with proposals, opportunity proposals that is. But only because of Karasuno's coach vacancy, someone had to take charge! Then Ukai-san swooped in.

The young man found himself in front of his third jeweler visit.

He steps in.
He doesn't know what the hell to do.
Nevermind that.

Daichi grabs the attention of a clerk.

"How may I help you this evening?"
He seems nice...

Check his fingers

Low and behold the magic band that indicates his relationship progress is maxed out, wraps tightly around the designated finger.

Oh, He'd put one of those on (F/N) so fast...

Daichi scoops himself out of his thoughts.

"You're married right?"

The clerk laughs "Tell me about this girl."

That was surprisingly easy.

"O-Oh well, she's really nice, and sweet to me all time. Not materialistic so nothing too big, but nothing too small either. Something that lets people know she's mine..." A goofy smile is evident on his face.

The clerk shakes his head Young Love he thinks.

The man directs Daichi's attention to a glass case containing stars and metals of all sorts. He scans over them and finally a rosey colored metal with swirls and diamonds becomes his target.

"May I take that one?" Daichi just can't wait to see the look on her face, what will it be?

The clerk nods and takes it out ready to price it for him.
While Daichi waits he directs his thoughts to the many pictures of his beloved contained in his phone.

He really loves her.
He really does.

The doorbell indicating a customer's arrival chimed but Daichi didn't mind he just wanted to get the ring then get the girl.

"Sawamura..."

He turns around to his happy girlfriend.
He panics.

"(F/N), hey."

"What are you doing here?" She gives him that loving smile of hers.

What's the most believable excuse...

"Getting my watch fixed."
Nailed it.

"But Daichi, you're wearing your watch."
The cute eyebrow thing is what makes Daichi sweat.
She got him.

"Oh! No not this one. It's another one." Hopefully, that satisfies her curiosity...

"Ok!"
Cute.

"So what are you doing here?" But really what is she doing here? She doesn't really own any jewelry...

She digs her hand into her purse and pulls out a box containing a necklace.
"Annual cleaning."

There's no way he can make it ou this time.
He's freaking out, what if she discovers his plans.
Even worse, what if he's rejected?

"Please step up Ma'am!"
Bless that clerk.

"Bye, Daichi!"
She leaves him with a kiss on the cheek.

It only takes a couple of minutes for them to clean it.
He figures he could say goodbye, no harm in that right?
So he starts to walk towards her, and everything crashes down when he hears that damn clerk.

"Sorry sir, do you perhaps know her ring size by any chance?"

Deep breaths...

Her eyes flick up to his awaiting the line of excuses about to run out of his mouth.

"Ring size?"
He's going to propose?
Her face turns red.

She knows.

"Yes..."
Daichi pulls a slip of paper from his pocket listing her size.

"Is this why you asked all those questions Daichi?"
This is the one time he can't read her emotions. And it's oddly terrifying

"Yes..."

All throughout the clerk just watches. Probably realizing what he'd just done, so he does what any other person would do.

"Thankyou for your purchase today..." and slides the black fuzzy box over to its owner.

"Thanks..."
Daichi grabs hold of (F/N)'s hand and leads her outside and pushes her into the car.

(F/N) waits patiently while he enters the other side.

He doesn't say anything, the same terrorized look he wore in the store is plastered across his usually soft face.

They arrive at their shared apartment and enter.
Still quiet.

"I had a whole plan and everything. For the proposing thing that is."

"So you are proposing right?"

"Depends on what you would say."
Daichi's hope is spilled out in that one phrase.

"I think you should do it..." She already knows her answer.

"You always give the best advice."
He gets up from his seating position and kneels in front of her with a big dumb grin on his face.

"(F/N) (L/N), I'm sorry this isn't exactly the dreamiest of proposals...Mostly because my initial plan was ruined
Umm...but if you'd like to accept my offer. That'd be gladly appreciated."

"That was the dorkiest thing I've ever seen you do." A smile equivalent to Daichi's rest on the bottom of her face.

"Total turn-off?"

"Definitely."

"Can I make it up to you?"

"Of course you can."

"As future Mrs.Sawamura or just Ms.(L/N)"

"I think we can work something out..."

Daichi's grin grew twenty times its size, so he scooped her up and he spent the rest of the afternoon showing her how much stress she actually put him through.
I love Daichi too much 
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My head is full of pink and fluffy clouds and shiny rosey sparkles, I absolutely adore this idea!!! :heart: ///

So, I have an odd obsession with ffs that involve love confessions, pregnancy or proposals XD. And this was honestly a very entertaining and absolutely cute story to read! Oh gawd I just can picture the mature and calm Daichi perfectly being nervous as hell and goofily-in-love when it comes to his girlfriend. And I literally imagined this as an anime episode and squeaked my lungs out!
Just a question out of curiousity: When in the whole storyline does this theoratically play?
I am starting to see that you've got a special writing style. It creates a very own way of emotional suspense, mainly created through your short sentences. I feels less lively, but contemplates mostly on the inner situation and shows the happenings all filtered through the emotions of who is 'telling' the story. Very mesmerizing! If you train it, I am sure you'll get a very unique style :love: